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February 29, 2008

Of Course The Black Is Infinite…

Steven Brust has written a novel length Firefly story. A free download under the Creative Commons license.

Brust is a professional writer, very respected in SF/Fantasy circles.

My Own Kind Of Freedom

My review:

Overall, I’d give this (very short) novel an A-. The tone and voice of the characters are very nearly spot on, there are no major lapses in characterization from what we know and love, and the story abounds with the lovely interweaving of comedy, tragedy, action and pathos that made Firefly our favorite show.

Brust’s admitted socialist sympathies don’t really raise their idealogical head. He does what a writer should when tackling characters that have a life outside his own imagination and were created by the group effort of others: he allows them to be their own creations. It’s literally impossible to not imagine the actors in their respective roles. Brust’s style lends itself well to the Firefly ‘Verse — his clean, minimalistic prose and spare imagery complementing the atmosphere and sleek pace we are used to from the show. He intentionally (I assume) sticks to a very cinematic style, not overloading the reader with interior dialogue and thoughts. The story is told mainly in conversation that is light, bantering and entertaining.

Brust’s depiction of River is especially interesting and enjoyable. She is the only character that he truly goes into the head of — and that’s something most fans want, I think. Her prismatic, complex, damaged but brilliant perceptions and observations are a delight to read. He does not dispel the necessary aura of mystery around the character, he deepens and embroiders it with excellent detail.

But it is Mal’s story where the novel truly shines, especially the flashbacks of his time of war. They concern the transformation of the Browncoats from a decentralized, widely dispersed force of small units harassing their larger and richer foe into an attempt to mimic that foe with a centralized army and the bureaucracy that requires. This, the novel suggests, is the main reason the Independants lost.

My only real complaints with the novel is that Brust is a bit repetitious with his humor, and the action scenes are often somewhat muddled.

Some other minor nitpicks:

The Chinese slang is very much overused. In the show it was almost always possible to deduce the meaning from context. It is most of the time in the novel, but not always. Also, reading Chinese is different from hearing Chinese. What added an exotic, intriguing element to the show mostly comes across as a roadblock in prose.

Wash is shown to be a pilot for the Browncoats in the war. I’m pretty sure that the show inferred he had no role on either side.

These are minor complaints (my major minor complaint [ha!] would be a spoiler, so I refrain.) and in no way stop me from recommending My Own Kind Of Freedom to every Firefly fan, either obsessive or casual.

February 22, 2008

Broke Circle (Part I)

Filed under: Fiction

1.

Dawn found him on the north side of the mountain, sheltered against the wind. His small fire from the night before still lived, and took only a handful of gathered twigs and a few moments of stirring to set to dancing again. He unpacked the aging enamel coffeepot from his pack and filled it with icy water from the nearby stream, sitting it precariously on the cross made by the two largest pieces of mostly burned wood in the fire. When it approached boiling, he threw in a handful of ground coffee and waited.

There he sat, as the world faded into view with the rising son and took notice of him; a tall-for-his age fifteen year old, thin and lanky, with close cropped black hair and the first smudges of a beard. Gray green eyes reflected the new light calmly, lacking the usual teenaged surliness. They simply observed and—more often than not—enjoyed what they saw.

The state of his campsite reflected something of his character as well. Other than himself, his fire, a backpack and a sleeping bag, the area looked undisturbed. No tracks led to this place and none would be found leaving it. No litter defaced the ground. He considered these hills and this forest to be his home, and he had been taught by his mother from an early age to keep his home in order.

As he sipped the bitter first cup he thought of his mother and smiled. She would not approved of his style of coffee making—considering it wasteful and messy. The strength and sheer number of his mother’s opinions was one of the reasons that he often spent nights on the side of this and other hills.

The main reason, however, rested a half mile downhill and a mile uproad, dreams still singing behind her closed eyes.

It took only two cups of the brutally strong coffee to get him in a walking mood. He made quick work of cleaning the pot and re-packing his meager gear. Before he left he paused by the trickle of a steam. In the flow of the water he lightly sketched a double hex, a composite blessing and ward against ill. Etched in the surface tension, the magic quickly spread. From this humble beginning, gravity would create the many forks and branches of Grassy Creek, and—with one skillful shape—he blessed all who lived on her banks.

Smiling, he wished them a silent good day, and began his journey down.

The trails he followed were known by few and fewer every year. One of the reasons he was accepted and liked by the old timers in the area was his curiosity and willingness to use such knowledge. Unlike the majority of his generation, he found the past to be a vast and fascinating treasure trove, as important to existence as present and future.

He moved along the trails with a sure step and surprising speed. He followed them from instinct rather than memory, a map drawn on his soul rather than his mind. He made it down the hill in less than ten minutes, emerging in a natural field by the two lane blacktop that everyone called Farmer’s Road. The narrow field was separated from the passing traffic by the Cow Fork of Grassy Creek, and shielded from sight by a copse of elm and oak.

He followed the foot trail a slightly uphill quarter of a mile east until he came to a natural crossing of the creek. He stepped nimbly over the flat stones and emerged on Farmer’s road in time to return the amiable wave tossed to him by a passing coal truck.

If he continued east, a twenty minute walk would bring him to the highway that led north to his home. But he turned west, intent on his morning business.

As usual, his stomach clenched with worry and anxiety rose in him. He called himself a fool. He knew that she was all right. The connection they shared was the most powerful he’d ever experienced: he knew when she had a cold or stubbed her toe. Even as he worried he could feel her calm heartbeat and knew she would wake up no worse for wear, though probably hungover.

He fretted anyway, and would until he saw her face and watched her chest rise and fall as she breathed.

Just over a half mile up the road he caught sight of the car. The dirty while Cavalier was it’s usual battered self, no sign of accident or injury.

He smiled as he drew closer. Cat was waiting for him, patiently cleaning herself on the roof of the car, knowing his habits as well as he did.

“Keeping an eye on her for me, girl?” he whispered when he arrived, running a hand down her sleek spine. She favored him with a sidewise glance and resumed her routine.

Cat had been with him for almost five years now. She’d been living with a town couple and had simply decided to follow him home one afternoon when he’d passed her on his way. The people she had lived with called her—for unknown, probably horrific reasons—Bootsie. She’d shed that awful tag with her former life, and had been just Cat ever since. She was his friend, companion and—in most things—his co-conspirator.

He looked in through the window and the tension left him. He grinned with real pleasure. Laine was curled up in the backseat, her face a serene and innocent mask of slumber.

It was a face that inspired a thousand conflicting emotions on the deepest levels of his self. A face that haunted his thoughts and dreams. A face he cherished and adored.

The face of the woman he loved.

Laine Wallace was a short dark haired girl who tended towards chubby. She had the most lovely gray eyes—like looking into an oncoming storm. He thought she was incredibly beautiful. Some guys considered her plain or even ugly, but he dismissed them as fools too blinded by spoon fed ideas about beauty to recognize the glory of such a unique face.

As he stared, her eyes opened. She gazed at him blearily for a moment, then smiled and yawned.

“Good morning, Kevin.” she said, stretching from her uncomfortable position. “If you have a cigarette I promise I’ll love you forever.”

Even though he knew she wasn’t serious, you’ve never seen a pack produced quicker.

2.

Kevin made himself comfortable in the passenger seat while Laine smoked and woke up. She told him the story of the previous night and he listened as if he hadn’t observed it all—laughing and gasping and expressing shock in all the right places.

In truth, though, he had quietly followed her through the entire night. From the moment she left her parent’s house until the instant she parked her car and passed out in the backseat. He’d watched her dance and laugh and joke with her friends. Watched her drink Absolut and apple juice past the point of stupidity. Suffered through her long makeout session with some guy he did not know but now hated like fire. He’d watched—hidden by a short distance, simple shadows, and an elaborate glamour. Watched and waited, ready to step into the situation and do what needed doing if anyone or anything threatened her with harm.

This is what he did every weekend.

Laine was sixteen—one year and three days older than Kevin. She viewed that as an almost uncrossable gulf. They had known each other since birth, had gone through every grade of school together, and been friends since infancy. Kevin knew that Laine loved him, but that her love was brotherly.

It tore his heart out.

But he did not allow it to show—the heartbreak or the love—just as he did not let her know that he watched over her while she partied. Kevin’s kin—and those like them—were old hands at hiding reality behind an illusion of the commonplace.

“I’m getting old.” she complained as she crawled from the backseat and climbed behind the wheel. To do this she steadied herself on Kevin’s shoulder, and he held his breath, memorizing that touch, savoring it.

“You just drink too much.” he replied, keeping any judgment out of his voice. She smiled, and refrained from disagreeing.

She started the car and the sound of the engine made Kevin wince. The damn thing sounded like a herd of dying buffalo. Shifting into drive and pulling out only increased the hideousness of the noise. Laine drove as if the car was a brand new dragster—gaining too much speed far too quickly. Under his breath, Kevin muttered a hex of protection, empowering it with his very real fear.

“You should really bring this car to the house, girl.” he told her when the hex was complete. “Let Dad look at it. It sounds…”

“I know.” she sighed, casually passing a loaded truck around a curb marked no passing. “I hate to bother him, though. I’m broke.”

Kevin rolled his eyes. “You know he wouldn’t charge you. He likes you.” He paused until they rounded a particularly bad double curb without dying. “And everybody else seems to live with asking him to work for free.”

Laine’s face took on a surprisingly prim set. “Just because everybody else is doing something doesn’t make it right for me to do something.” Kevin stifled a laugh, and wondered if she knew how much she sounded like her mother.

“I’m not a bum.” she informed him. “Hey…gimme another smoke.”

He shook his head and laughed. Laine didn’t seem to catch on. He smoked on occasion, but mostly kept the cigarettes for her. He lit one and passed it to her.

They reached the end of Farmer’s Road and Laine turned to him. “You want a ride home?”

“Nah.” he told her. “I’m heading to Edge Hills. If you’re not doing anything you should take me. They want a twenty sack. I got some of that kill shit like I got last year.”

Laine’s eyes widened. “Aww, hell! It is harvest time, ain’t it!” Her face broke into an expression of delight and surprise. She pointed the car towards Edge Hills and sped off without another thought.

“If you forgot about that you really are drinking too much.” he told her.

She just grinned at him.

Halfway to their destination, the muffler fell off. They ended up announcing their arrival at Edge Hills with great fanfare and much annoyance.

February 21, 2008

Fidel Wanders Off

Filed under: Good News

So, Castro has retired. He may even be dead. Hard to call with the information lockdown Cuba is justly famous for.

This is good news — or at least possibly good news — for Cuban people, both on the island and in the Diaspora. With the totemic visage of Castro gone, it’s quite likely that the Cuban government will undergo some seismic disturbances in the next few years. In truth, I think it was merely that old bastards longevity and ability to stay un-assassinated that let it hold out for this long.

Communist Nationalism never worked on a large scale, and Cuba’s relatively small population and the loyalty engendered by Us vs. The World is the only reason it lingered on there.

While it’s certainly possible that things could stay the same or get worse, I wouldn’t bet on it. I’d bet on a gradual but gaining speed erosion of both Communist ideaology, the embargo, and the tyrannical border paranoia.

Why? The simplest reason of all: the desire of politicians for wealth and power. The rulers of Cuba have pretty much exhausted the limits for both in their closed society. With Castro gone the largest stumbling block to milking the rest of the world for more has been removed.

Here’s hoping that I can post ‘Welcome back to the World, Cuba!’ very soon.

February 10, 2008

Up From The Depths…

For all intents and purposes, I am back — with stories to tell.

I’ve been working on a long essay about my three month adventure on the raggedy edge, but have been having trouble wrapping the damn thing up. I wanted to re-start the blog with a bang, but I miss posting daily enough that I’ll have to be satisfied with a rousing Pop! :P

In the next few days I plan on posting the aforementioned essay, a prequel to Tessellation called Broke Circle, and another long essay on primitivism vs. progressionism that owes a debt of inspiration to William Gillis of the superb blog Human Iterations (linked handily on the sidebar there!) I’ll also be plugging my book Symbols Flow currently on sale.

Along with that will be my usual meandering thoughts on thisn’that, news both bad and good, book and movie reviews and all matter of other unseemly foofaral.

Glad to be back.

Hope you’re glad to see me.

-G.

October 10, 2007

On Being Alive

Filed under: Uncategorized

Just a quick note to let everyone know that I am alive and well and living in decent comfort at The Salvation army in Kingsport, TN. I’ve been beating the streets putting in applications and have a good feeling. There seems to be plenty of people hiring for just about everything. Might even get a job cooking again, who knows.

Free WiFi broadband everywhere here. I’m getting decent speed in this concrete building.

I’ll keep you all posted. Peace and prosperity.

-G.

October 5, 2007

Slack Jack & His Adventures In The Movin’ Game.

Filed under: Personal

Expect sparse posts for a little while, folks. I’m pretty consumed with the process of moving. Consider the story situation ‘on hold’. Bill — you might want to remove the sticky from the top of ETWOF for now. Sorry, man — but I promise to get back to it ASAP.

I’ll keep you all updated on my trip. When I get to K-Port I’ll be non-stop job hunting. I’ll be staying at The Salvation Army for the first month unless I luck out and get a killer job straight out of the gate. The SA might be near enough to a WiFi spot to let me get online, but I doubt I’m that lucky.

Until I get a place/connection of my own I’ll keep in touch by getting my morning coffee at Mickey D’s.

Anyway — very excited and a little nervous. Mostly excited though. Here I com, road. I’ve missed ya.

October 2, 2007

Remembering Kubrick

Filed under: Uncategorized

Stanley Kubrick was a master.

In the annals of film he is a legend and he will always be a legend, like Murnau and Hitchcock before him. Why? Because, quite simply, he did things with 35 and 70 mm silver nitrate emulsion film and sprocket coded sound that not only had never been done, but were believed to be impossible to do with the state of the art.

Part technical genius geek, part mad scientist, part cold blooded existential philosopher, part beat poet. Kubrick rewrote the code of modern cinema production, gave a hearty middle finger to the suits, did exactly what he wanted to when he wanted to and got away with it.

This man made the hair stand up on the back of my neck depicting a spaceship approaching a station with The Beautiful Blue Danube rolling its glory on the soundtrack, forever changing my conception of the word beauty. This is the man who made me weep honest tears when they took ‘The Glorious Ninth’ from a total monster like Alex DeLarge and proved to me that morality was a thing that lived in what you were not willing to do. This man showed me that when faced with the ultimate horror of a destroyed world the only human thing to do was laugh.

Kubrick’s medium is nearly gone now. The tools of the trade have changed. His films will never be equalled.

I wept the day he died. I have so few heroes left. He — as distant and quiet to his fans as he was — was one of the biggest.

October 1, 2007

Happy October!

Filed under: Personal

This is probably my favorite month, for entirely weather related and aesthetic reasons. I like the nice cold nights (just pulling out my quilt is a happy day for me) and the pleasantly warm-to comfortably cool days.

I also like the look of foliage when it’s getting ready for winter. Not the oft-admired ‘changing colors’ so much as the actual look of the skeleton trees. Very cool. :)

September 30, 2007

Tote dat bale…

Filed under: Personal

Still packing, cleaning and doing the other hundred and one things necessary to move. It’s a good thing I’m travelling light. A heavy trip would drive me insane.

Will try to have some writing up tomorrow. Hope all is well amongst the readerfolk.

September 29, 2007

Mark!

Filed under: Uncategorized

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